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[Volnushka]

Мне нужно обратиться к автору мед. статьи (там был указан его e-мэйл). ИИ хотелось бы, чтоб звучало вежливо (тем более,что сам факт такого письма уже ,как бы ,нахальство). Ну словом, чтоб он ответил на вопрос...

Dear Michael,
I was impressed with your article “***” about how prophylactic antibiotics could reduce the number of recurrent ***. http://www.***
You mentioned prophylactic antibiotics such as ***.
However after had being looked for some articles of clinical trials on-line, I found out that each of them mentioned different prophylactic antibiotics for this condition. Some of them even mentioned some of the prophylactic antibiotics above as treatment antibiotics.
For example:
http://clinicaltrials.gov/***
http://www.pubmedcentral.****

In other words, the results of my on-line research look like a kind of contradictable and it makes me absolutely confused: which antibiotics belongs to prophylactic ones and which one belong just to treatment? Does it mean that they are the same
and it is just a matter of dosage or/and time range?
Without knowing that, it would be unclear how to distinguish those patients who were on prophylaxis and those ones who were not.
My question is:
Is there any list of the most frequently prescribed prophylactic antibiotics versus treatment antibiotics? Could you be so kind to address me to the resource where I could get them or better provide with the list of basic ones (except those you already mentioned in your article) ?

In case they differ just in dosage....how to distinguich which dosage is just a prophylactic one and which one is not?

In other words…how to distinguish prophylactic antibiotics from treatment ones?
I also would be interested in the following question : if prophylactic antibiotics were prescribed after ****test or…just like certainpreventive ones regardless to the fact of ***test results?
I would greatly appreciate for your answer!

With respect,

Volnushka

[OZ]

Я конечно не English major, но некоторые фразы режут ухо.

However after had being looked for some articles of clinical trials on-line, I found out that each of them mentioned different prophylactic antibiotics for this condition.

I looked for some clinical trials articles on-line, I have found

In other words, the results of my on-line research look like a kind of contradictable and it makes me absolutely confused: which antibiotics belongs to prophylactic ones and which one belong just to treatment?

are contradictory and left me confused

Could you be so kind to address me to the resource where I could get them or better provide with the list of basic ones (except those you already mentioned in your article) ?

to give me a reference to a resource where I could get the list or, if it's possible, to provide me with the list of basic ones (except those you have already

I also would be interested in the following question : if prophylactic antibiotics were prescribed after ****test or…just like certainpreventive ones regardless to the fact of ***test results?

I am also interested in the following: are prophylactic antibiotics prescribed after *** test? Or, just like certain preventative antibiotics, it's prescribed regardless results of **** test?

[Volnushka]

Большое спасибо!

[Josephina]

Большое спасибо!

Volnushka, письмо несколько затянуто в изложении, где oчень длинные и замысловатые фразы. Попробуйте ещё раз, но кратко и без излишних эмоций к автору статьи.
Так же, вместо With respect, лучше Sincerely, Volnushka.

Примерно так:
Прочитала статью *****, заинтересовали некоторые вопросы, а именно......
Была бы очень признательна за ответ.
С уважением, Волнушка.

[Volnushka]

Укоротила Thank you!