Раскритикуйте резюме, please!
Добавлено: Вт окт 09, 2007 11:22 pm
Ситуация такова: попросили помочь - человек в настоящее время работает в области финансов, но ищет работу в human resources. Резюме, насколько я понял, затачивалось имено под это.
сам я резюме в жизни не составлял
, поэтому мне трудно судить. обратил внимание, что напрочь отсутствует objective, на что мне сказали, что objective будет меняться в зависимости от компании, куда это резюме будет посылаться ???
Подскажите пожалуйста, насколько резюме приемлимо, что исправить, как улучшить?
Заранее спасибо
Само резюме:
XXXXXXXXXXXXXX
address
phone
e-mail
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATIONS:
Bilingual: English and Russian
Computer Skills: MS Office, People Soft, Lotus Notes, SurPAS, Image, U-TOA database
Effective written and verbal communication skills
Task oriented, highly organized team player with an ability to work cooperatively with diverse personalities
Proficient in combining creativity with business strategies
EXPERIENCE:
09/2003-Present PFPC, INC., Pawtucket, RI
INVESTMENT SPECIALIST
Instructed 20 new hires in departmental guidelines and procedures, assuring successful acclimatization in the company
Built, fostered and maintained relationship with internal and external clients
Developed and implemented workflow procedures that ensured greater efficiency and productivity
Promoted from Investment Associate to Investment Service Specialist
Researched, analyzed and summarized financial transactions
Assured confidentiality, accuracy and compliance with state and federal laws and company’s policies
08/2002-07/2003 GVR COMMUNICATIONS&ELECTRONICS, INC., North Kingstown, RI
BUSINESS ADMINISTRATOR
Headed hiring and training processes, evaluated employees’ performance
Developed successful training program for new hires to reach their full potential
Organized and managed display booth to showcase products at URI Student Fairs
Created, customized and completed advertising campaign that increased sales by 20%
Supervised and motivated employees; Scheduled and assigned tasks, maintained employees’ records
Enhanced employees’ reward program, organized employee events, was responsible for employee relation
CHUVASH STATE TV/RADIO, Cheboksary, Russia
MARKETING RELATIONSHIP MANAGER
Began career as Radio Host 1995-1998; promoted to Program Producer 1998-1999; and to Marketing Relationship Manager 1999-2001
Approved open air programs, commercials and jingles, supported and promoted TV/Radio programs
Interviewed, trained, inspired radio personnel to be the dedicated to the radio ideas
Organized promotion of the radio station that became the most popular station in a very competitive market 1999
Increased television sponsors significantly by organizing Millennium 2000 Festival, a four-hour television stage show with translation
Instrumental in adding FM wave that increased audience significantly (from 300,000 listeners to 1 million).
Received Award for performance in hosting “Voice of the Town” 2000.
Demonstrated ability to feel the pulse of the music industry, clients’ needs, organizational development, and identify and support talents.
EDUCATION:
BRYANT UNIVERSITY, Smithfield, Rhode Island 2004-2005
Certification, Human Resources Management
CHUVASH STATE UNIVERSITY, Cheboksary, Russia 1995-2001
Jurisprudence, B.S.
Major: Business Administration
CHEBOKSARY PEDAGOGICAL COLLEGE, Cheboksary, Russia 1991-1995
Education and Psychology, B.S.
References are available upon request
сам я резюме в жизни не составлял
, поэтому мне трудно судить. обратил внимание, что напрочь отсутствует objective, на что мне сказали, что objective будет меняться в зависимости от компании, куда это резюме будет посылаться ???
Подскажите пожалуйста, насколько резюме приемлимо, что исправить, как улучшить?
Заранее спасибо
Само резюме:
XXXXXXXXXXXXXX
address
phone
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATIONS:
Bilingual: English and Russian
Computer Skills: MS Office, People Soft, Lotus Notes, SurPAS, Image, U-TOA database
Effective written and verbal communication skills
Task oriented, highly organized team player with an ability to work cooperatively with diverse personalities
Proficient in combining creativity with business strategies
EXPERIENCE:
09/2003-Present PFPC, INC., Pawtucket, RI
INVESTMENT SPECIALIST
Instructed 20 new hires in departmental guidelines and procedures, assuring successful acclimatization in the company
Built, fostered and maintained relationship with internal and external clients
Developed and implemented workflow procedures that ensured greater efficiency and productivity
Promoted from Investment Associate to Investment Service Specialist
Researched, analyzed and summarized financial transactions
Assured confidentiality, accuracy and compliance with state and federal laws and company’s policies
08/2002-07/2003 GVR COMMUNICATIONS&ELECTRONICS, INC., North Kingstown, RI
BUSINESS ADMINISTRATOR
Headed hiring and training processes, evaluated employees’ performance
Developed successful training program for new hires to reach their full potential
Organized and managed display booth to showcase products at URI Student Fairs
Created, customized and completed advertising campaign that increased sales by 20%
Supervised and motivated employees; Scheduled and assigned tasks, maintained employees’ records
Enhanced employees’ reward program, organized employee events, was responsible for employee relation
CHUVASH STATE TV/RADIO, Cheboksary, Russia
MARKETING RELATIONSHIP MANAGER
Began career as Radio Host 1995-1998; promoted to Program Producer 1998-1999; and to Marketing Relationship Manager 1999-2001
Approved open air programs, commercials and jingles, supported and promoted TV/Radio programs
Interviewed, trained, inspired radio personnel to be the dedicated to the radio ideas
Organized promotion of the radio station that became the most popular station in a very competitive market 1999
Increased television sponsors significantly by organizing Millennium 2000 Festival, a four-hour television stage show with translation
Instrumental in adding FM wave that increased audience significantly (from 300,000 listeners to 1 million).
Received Award for performance in hosting “Voice of the Town” 2000.
Demonstrated ability to feel the pulse of the music industry, clients’ needs, organizational development, and identify and support talents.
EDUCATION:
BRYANT UNIVERSITY, Smithfield, Rhode Island 2004-2005
Certification, Human Resources Management
CHUVASH STATE UNIVERSITY, Cheboksary, Russia 1995-2001
Jurisprudence, B.S.
Major: Business Administration
CHEBOKSARY PEDAGOGICAL COLLEGE, Cheboksary, Russia 1991-1995
Education and Psychology, B.S.
References are available upon request