а перечислять их не надо. просто написать эту строчку и все?
Ету строчку не пишите. Ето понятно, по умолчаию. Просто перечислите их.
Статьи напишите, даже, если они на стадии подготовки (показывает конкретные результаты, на мой взгляд; плюс, если будут сканить, то за ключевое слово может зацепятся). В остальном согласен с 77РУС99.
И ошибки, девушка, ошибки нужно найти и исправить.
Окончательный вариант, можете снова повесить. Покритикуем.
так вчера села и заново все переписала, может так лучше? или все таки первый вариант доправить?
Full Name, M.Sc., B.Sc.
House number- street,
City, state Postal code
Phone: XXX XXX-XXXX (h)
E-mail: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
OBJECTIVE
Technologist Position at the Company name
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION
· Experienced in Analytical, Organic, Inorganic, Physical Chemistry, Biochemistry and Proteomics
· Successfully transferred and applied previous knowledge and experience to new fields
· Rapidly learned and successfully performed a number of complicated techniques and methods, operated high performance machines and instruments
· Over a short period of time obtained unique data, which led to manuscript preparation
· Due to possessing excellent management skills, had established a highly operative and effective team working environment
EDUCATION
M.Sc. in Physical Chemistry (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia
Thesis “Kinetics of the decarboxylic acids anhydrides reaction with aniline in organics solvents” passed with distinction
B.Sc. in Chemistry and Biology (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia
Major Field: Chemistry
Minor Field: Biology
EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
· University of XXXXX, Department of Biological Sciences, Protein Biochemistry Group, XXXXXXX
Chemist (02/07-04/07)
- Fluorescence Spectroscopy;
- Analysis of the fluorescent spectra of photoreactions of the tryptophan
- High performance liquid chromatography (HPLC) products reactions.
- Mass-spectroscopy combined with matrix assisted laser desorption ionization (MALDI) to analyze reaction products and by-products.
· Maternity leave (02/01-02/07)
· Pharmacy Warehouse, City, Russia
Pharmacy Sales Manager (08/97-10/99)
Recruited and trained sales stuff; supervised and monitored team performance; set budgets; reported back to senior managers; dealt with customers and other managers
· XXXXXXX State University, Department of Physical Chemistry, City,
Russia
Research Associate (01/96-06/97)
- Reaction kinetics in organic solvents with applying spectroscopic and calorimetric techniques; polymer chemistry; organic synthesis and purification
TRAINING
Mass Spectrometer Use
HPLC automated system Operator
??????
SKILLS & ABILITIES
Р Communication and writing skills
Р Management skills
Р Good attention to detail
Р Multitasking and organizing skills
Р Problem solving
Р Database management
Р Learns quickly, ready for continued education and training
PUBLICATIONS
Authors. Title XXXXXXXX. Year. (manuscript in preparation)
LANGUAGES
Speaking, reading and writing in English and native Russian
IMMIGRASHION STATUS --- XXXXXXXXXX
REFERENCES -- Available Upon Request
tatyana u have PM. Please remove immigration status - u'll put it in the covel letter
tatiana N. писал(а):так вчера села и заново все переписала, может так лучше? или все таки первый вариант доправить?
Full Name, M.Sc., B.Sc.
House number- street, City, state Postal code Phone: XXX XXX-XXXX (h) E-mail: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
OBJECTIVE Technologist Position at the Company name
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION · Experienced in Analytical, Organic, Inorganic, Physical Chemistry, Biochemistry and Proteomics · Successfully transferred and applied previous knowledge and experience to new fields · Rapidly learned and successfully performed a number of complicated techniques and methods, operated high performance machines and instruments · Over a short period of time obtained unique data, which led to manuscript preparation · Due to possessing excellent management skills, had established a highly operative and effective team working environment
EDUCATION M.Sc. in Physical Chemistry (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia Thesis “Kinetics of the decarboxylic acids anhydrides reaction with aniline in organics solvents” passed with distinction
B.Sc. in Chemistry and Biology (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia Major Field: Chemistry Minor Field: Biology
EMPLOYMENT HISTORY · University of XXXXX, Department of Biological Sciences, Protein Biochemistry Group, XXXXXXX Chemist (02/07-04/07) - Fluorescence Spectroscopy; - Analysis of the fluorescent spectra of photoreactions of the tryptophan - High performance liquid chromatography (HPLC) products reactions. - Mass-spectroscopy combined with matrix assisted laser desorption ionization (MALDI) to analyze reaction products and by-products.
· Maternity leave (02/01-02/07)
· Pharmacy Warehouse, City, Russia Pharmacy Sales Manager (08/97-10/99) Recruited and trained sales stuff; supervised and monitored team performance; set budgets; reported back to senior managers; dealt with customers and other managers
· XXXXXXX State University, Department of Physical Chemistry, City, Russia
Research Associate (01/96-06/97) - Reaction kinetics in organic solvents with applying spectroscopic and calorimetric techniques; polymer chemistry; organic synthesis and purification
TRAINING Mass Spectrometer Use HPLC automated system Operator ??????
SKILLS & ABILITIES Р Communication and writing skills Р Management skills Р Good attention to detail Р Multitasking and organizing skills Р Problem solving Р Database management Р Learns quickly, ready for continued education and training
PUBLICATIONS Authors. Title XXXXXXXX. Year. (manuscript in preparation)
LANGUAGES Speaking, reading and writing in English and native Russian
IMMIGRASHION STATUS --- XXXXXXXXXX REFERENCES -- Available Upon Request
House number- street,
City, state Postal code
Phone: XXX XXX-XXXX (h)
E-mail: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
OBJECTIVE
Technologist Position at the Company name
Позиция так и называется - Technologist? Убрать такой objective
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION
· Experienced in Analytical, Organic, Inorganic, Physical Chemistry, Biochemistry and Proteomics
· Successfully transferred and applied previous knowledge and experience to new fields · Rapidly learned and successfully performed a number of complicated techniques and methods, operated high performance machines and instruments · Over a short period of time obtained unique data, which led to manuscript preparation · Due to possessing excellent management skills, had established a highly operative and effective team working environment Выделенное выше к квалификации не имеет отношения
Все глаголы убрать в сделанные проекты. В квалификацию - перечисление методов, методик и т.п.
EDUCATION
M.Sc. in Physical Chemistry (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia
Thesis “Kinetics of the decarboxylic acids anhydrides reaction with aniline in organics solvents” passed with distinction
Имеются в виду ангидриды дикарбоновых кислот?
B.Sc. in Chemistry and Biology (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia
Major Field: Chemistry
Minor Field: Biology
Выделенное - убрать. EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
· University of XXXXX, Department of Biological Sciences, Protein Biochemistry Group, XXXXXXX
Chemist (02/07-04/07)
- Fluorescence Spectroscopy;
- Analysis of the fluorescent spectra of photoreactions of the tryptophan
- High performance liquid chromatography (HPLC) products reactions.
- Mass-spectroscopy combined with matrix assisted laser desorption ionization (MALDI) to analyze reaction products and by-products.
Вот здесь должны быть глаголы, а не простое перечисление методов.
· Maternity leave (02/01-02/07)
· Pharmacy Warehouse, City, Russia
Pharmacy Sales Manager (08/97-10/99)
Recruited and trained sales stuff; supervised and monitored team performance; set budgets; reported back to senior managers; dealt with customers and other managers
· XXXXXXX State University, Department of Physical Chemistry, City,
Russia
Research Associate (01/96-06/97)
- Reaction kinetics in organic solvents with applying spectroscopic and calorimetric techniques; polymer chemistry; organic synthesis and purification
TRAINING Mass Spectrometer Use HPLC automated system Operator ??????
Убрать, если нет каких-нибудь сертификатов о прохождении курсов, семинаров и т.п.
SKILLS & ABILITIES Р Communication and writing skills Р Management skills Р Good attention to detail Р Multitasking and organizing skills Р Problem solving Р Database management Р Learns quickly, ready for continued education and training
Об этом напишете в cover letter. Из резюме убрать.
PUBLICATIONS
Authors. Title XXXXXXXX. Year. (manuscript in preparation)
LANGUAGES Speaking, reading and writing in English and native Russian
Убрать IMMIGRASHION STATUS --- XXXXXXXXXX
Убрать REFERENCES -- Available Upon Request
Включите проверку орфографии в Microsoft Word, если вы им пользуетесь.
Olelukoye писал(а):EDUCATION M.Sc. in Physical Chemistry (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia Thesis “Kinetics of the decarboxylic acids anhydrides reaction with aniline in organics solvents” passed with distinction
Olelukoye писал(а):EDUCATION M.Sc. in Physical Chemistry (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia Thesis “Kinetics of the decarboxylic acids anhydrides reaction with aniline in organics solvents” passed with distinction
Имеются в виду ангидриды дикарбоновых кислот?
да
Циклические? Янтарной и глутаровой кислот?
Напишите cyclic anhydrides.
Olelukoye писал(а):EDUCATION M.Sc. in Physical Chemistry (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia Thesis “Kinetics of the decarboxylic acids anhydrides reaction with aniline in organics solvents” passed with distinction
Имеются в виду ангидриды дикарбоновых кислот?
да
Циклические? Янтарной и глутаровой кислот? Напишите cyclic anhydrides.
ааа, я просто думала, что по английски не правильно перевела. это название дипломной работы. как сформировал руководитель, я так и перевела. хорошо укажу.
tatiana N. писал(а):ааа, я просто думала, что по английски не правильно перевела. это название дипломной работы. как сформировал руководитель, я так и перевела. хорошо укажу.
Да, неправильно перевели. Перевели дословно и с ошибкой, получилась глупость.
tatiana N. писал(а):ааа, я просто думала, что по английски не правильно перевела. это название дипломной работы. как сформировал руководитель, я так и перевела. хорошо укажу.
Да, неправильно перевели. Перевели дословно и с ошибкой, получилась глупость.
Olelukoye писал(а):EDUCATION M.Sc. in Physical Chemistry (year) - XXXXX State University, City, Russia Thesis “Kinetics of the decarboxylic acids anhydrides reaction with aniline in organics solvents” passed with distinction
Имеются в виду ангидриды дикарбоновых кислот?
да
Циклические? Янтарной и глутаровой кислот? Напишите cyclic anhydrides.
так вы меня засмущали этим вопросом, что вчера лазила и искала. ангидриды дикарбоновых кислот, так и называются. у них куча конечно синонимов. еще их часто называют токсик ангидриды. т.е. такие как янтарной кислоты или малеиновый ангидрид. а то что вы упомянули это совсем другие ангидриды.
По поводу < HPLC automated system Operator > . Я в этом деле не спец, но знакомая, проработавшая в разных компаниях оператором robotic HPLC systems говорила, что опыт работы с ними ценится. Так что если Вы умеете ими пользоваться, я бы где-нибудь это оставила (может быть, не training, а skills или experience).
И вообще любые названия методов, с которыми есть опыт, лучше где-нибудь вставить, на случай если HR будет делать поиск по ключевым словам.
"If you thought that science was certain - well, that is just an error on your part." Richard Feynman
tatiana N. писал(а): - Analysis of the fluorescent spectra of photoreactions of the tryptophan
Мне кажется все-таки Analysis of fluorescence spectra, поскольку сам спектр по себе не флюоресцирует
- High performance liquid chromatography (HPLC) products reactions.
Вы имеете ввиду HPLC of reaction products ?
- Mass-spectroscopy combined with matrix assisted laser desorption ionization (MALDI) to analyze reaction products and by-products.
· Maternity leave (02/01-02/07)
Я думаю не стоит включать такую личную инфо в резюме. На интервью обьясните если спросят. Все равно у вас есть пробелы в time line: 10/99--???-- 02/01
· Pharmacy Warehouse, City, Russia Pharmacy Sales Manager (08/97-10/99) Recruited and trained sales stuff; supervised and monitored team performance; set budgets; reported back to senior managers; dealt with customers and other managers
May be: communicated with customers ??
· XXXXXXX State University, Department of Physical Chemistry, City, Russia
Research Associate (01/96-06/97) - Studied Reaction kinetics (of what?) in organic solvents with (what? UV, AA, HPLC, MS, fluorescence ) and calorimetric techniques; polymer chemistry; organic synthesis (of what?) and purification
Be more specific, give more detailes about your project
TRAINING Mass Spectrometer Use HPLC automated system Operator ??????
I would keep this in the resume but, probably, put it somewhere in Experience section. You need to show your employer that you have some experience with certain lab equipment. But you would need to be more specific. what mass spectrometers did you work with (i.e. Thermofinnigan LTQ Deca, or Axiom VG etc)?
What chromatography systems did you work with? (i.e. Waters, etc) But that is just machinery. You need to tell more: did you do reverse phase, ion exchange, TLC, etc chromatography.
SKILLS & ABILITIES Р Communication and writing skills Р Management skills Р Good attention to detail Р Multitasking and organizing skills Р Problem solving Р Database management Р Learns quickly, ready for continued education and training
PUBLICATIONS Authors. Title XXXXXXXX. Year. (manuscript in preparation)
LANGUAGES Speaking, reading and writing in English and native Russian
IMMIGRASHION STATUS --- XXXXXXXXXX REFERENCES -- Available Upon Request
