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Как вам такая фраза:
(...something we do...), which gives us two major advantages:
...

По-моему получается по-русски...
А замены придумать не могу...
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Running all applications from one box gives us two major advantages:...
Our E-commerce websites are designed in modular fashion, which gives us two major advantages.
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vaduz wrote:Running all applications from one box gives us two major advantages:...
Our E-commerce websites are designed in modular fashion, which gives us two major advantages.
Пишем для "нас" или для "них"?
Если для потребителя текст, то ему не сильно интересно, какие "для нас" прелести, ему интересно, что для него хорошо :mrgreen:

Running all applications from one box gives us has two major advantages...

...are designed in modular fashion, which has two major advantages.
......... modular fashion design [feature] has (provides, ensures, guarantees, offers, gives you, ...) two major advantages.
...are designed in modular fashion, featuring two major advantages.
... are designed in modular fashion, which is good for two major reasons.
... are powered by modular technology, and by leveraging the doubled efficiency provide an uncountable number of advantages :mrgreen:

Очень богатое слово - feature/featuring!
(powered by , leverage, holistic, DNA, overarching, и др. На ББС статейка была про слова, запрещенные к использованию типа в горсовете каком-то британском - оттуда можно было бы много полезного почерпнуть :mrgreen: )
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Palych wrote:Как вам такая фраза:
(...something we do...), which gives us two major advantages:
...

По-моему получается по-русски...
А замены придумать не могу...
Можно, например, начать разливаться мыслию по древу:
We do something.
First of all, it provides an incredible advantage ... (compared with what they are doing, or not doing it at all, or leave it without comparison)......
Second of all (абсолютно не по-русски! :mrgreen: ), blah blah blah
And even more, blah blah ... :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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vaduz wrote:Running all applications from one box gives us two major advantages:...
Our E-commerce websites are designed in modular fashion, which gives us two major advantages.

Хотите сказать что это очень не по-русски?

Пишем для них. Растекаться как раз не хотелось бы, надо донести мысль как можно короче, пока публика не заснула со скуки.

Эти самые advantages хотелось бы перечислить:
1. First advantage;
2. Second advantage.

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